經驗分享: 短文寫作練習

很欣賞依凡老師寫的「耍"句"喔!耍"句"」系列, 其中的第三篇談到教小小孩寫童詩, 讓我想起幾年前跟學生玩過的一個形容詞的寫作練習. 真的真的, 絶對不能只丟一個題目叫學生寫, 一點引導, 啟發, 聯想, 或是練習都沒有, 就要學生"無中生有", 其實是在扼殺學生寫作的興趣, 甚至是導致"討厭中文"的無形殺手, 真的是很可怕的一件事. 我一直認為, 培養孩子對中文的興趣, 遠遠重要於教了幾個生字, 或是教了幾課.

以下的swf檔是我的六年級學生的暑假作業, 供大家參考一下. 我想說的重點是, 重要的不在於學生們寫得好不好. 而是, 學生們對這個作業的反應. 你們是否注意到, 我只要求學生選五個詞,  寫一篇100個字的短文即可, 可是有不少學生選了不只五個, 而且遠超過一百個字的低標. 學生們的自我要求, 才是我想要的. 可能有人會想, 這樣的寫作, 學生沒有太多的創意空間 (其實他們編出來的故事還蠻好笑的),  那就得看每班的程度狀況, 及課堂活動設計的重點是什麼. 當初接下那個班, 正值他們的叛逆期, 全班有一大半的學生上課不聽, 作業不交, 考試不寫, 經過一年的努力, 第一年的暑假, 看到他們交回來的作業 (短文練習只是其中一部分), 我是很感動的.

 

 

那一年接下那個班, 雖然那個班的學生都是華裔子弟, 可是大多是能聽, 但是用中文回答的能力就很勉強了. 我看了一下課本, 決定把那年的教學重點放在形容詞的應用與練習上. 班上大部分的學生簡單的對話可以, 名詞動詞可以, 形容詞就不太行了. 我們從最簡單的形容一個人的外表長相做起, 還是有學生會說出"他很短", 這樣的句子.  我們玩"猜猜我是誰",玩"故事接龍", 一點一滴把許多的形容詞加進去. 從剛開始的一句話, 到後來的一篇短文, 是慢慢累積起來的.

快開學了, 深深期望再也沒有老師只是丟一個題目或是作業給學生寫, 而是慢慢引導學生, 讓學生們可以快樂的學習中文.

1,322 thoughts on “經驗分享: 短文寫作練習

  1. 心心~雙胞胎妹妹?姊姊?哥哥?弟弟?
    哈哈~我們的看法還真的完全一樣哩~
    好棒的範例
    我也衷心希望老師們能真正的引導學生,讓孩子們能快樂的學習中文~

  2. Hi 早啊, ucs!

    我的迴響標題好像原本就是灰色, 沒去動它, 有空再去改它. 快開學了, 還有好多事沒做呢.

  3. 喜歡妳們這對雙胞胎的理念, 不管怎麼 “玩” 就是要讓孩子們有興趣, 有了興趣就有了動力, 有了動力才能長長久久。
    謝謝分享!

  4. 雄哥, 我可以這樣叫你, 因為我百分之百確定你是”快樂”的人. (正確應該是顏哥啦)

    很高興你也來看心心. ^_^

    對啊, 我們超愛玩的!!

    學生快樂, 老師快樂, 學習快樂, 教書快樂, 大家快樂!!!

  5. 林姊!啊~呵~怪怪的,還是叫心心比較順口

    放了一個禮物在 usc 的家,快去收禮物。

    順便介紹一下我大學同學 “楊哥”,他家就住萬華,玩 “快樂” ,比我資深多了,他的 “贈閱振岳教學園地” 滿精采的:

    http://tmw6.tmps.tp.edu.tw/yahappy3/

  6. 雄哥, 太棒了, 有禮物收, 趕快去瞧瞧.

    你是社區組的嗎? 楊姐, 張姐, 孔媽, 黃姐, 你都記得嗎? 我是73年的, 你呢?

    看到”楊哥”的blog了, 很”快樂”的樣子, 不過我不認識他.曾是”快樂”的, 我都無條件喜歡. (我老公也是”快樂”的喔!)

    現在, 要趕去拆禮物了. 先謝啦.

  7. 親愛的雄哥,

    怎麼辦, 感動得快哭了啦, 是特地爲我改的耶, 超幸福的. 怎麼辦, 怎麼辦呢? 真的好感動……

    聽著11點的歌~你不知道的事. 真有催淚作用. 我還是要努力相信這世界是美好的,讓我有機會認識這麼多熱情又善良的人.

  8. 11點的歌好聽但太悲了啦! 11要多聽一些振奮人心的歌才行,例如:中國一定強……之類的!

    參加 “快樂” 的印象,在公園和孩子們玩的情景和受訓還有印象,期別已經忘了(78 or 79),那一、兩年太貪心,參加很多活動,我也是救國團的金山假期服務員。

    ps.前一篇留言把心心打錯了啦!幫人家改一下啦!(仙女耍懶中)

  9. 哈哈!! “中國一定強”, 有空一定要去找出來, 點給11聽. 太適合點給她了!!

    哇! 仙女會耍賴喔, 第一次看到, 好神奇的畫面, 卡擦卡擦, 拍照留念了, 永遠記得.

    ps. 原來, 雄哥是愛當”仙女”的喔, 失敬失敬. 切記切記!

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